All Comments on 'My Naga King'

by Reddestiny921

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

This was an interesting beginning to this story.

What is Cassandra's background and was this event foreseen.

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 11 years ago
Interesting indeed

A good start to what appears to be a good series, hope to see more like this.

ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 11 years ago

Good start and interesting too.

FaithWhiteFaithWhitealmost 11 years ago
Good Start

I enjoyed the start and very much would like to read more so don't stop writing. You write very well.

Love the ideas coming through.

Shadowreader7Shadowreader7almost 11 years ago
Good

Nice start looking forward to the rest

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaalmost 11 years ago
Different,for sure

Yes,its a new twist on things for sure,will keep reading just to see where this goes.Your placement of comma's makes the reading a bit confusing,have them were they arent needed and dont have them where they are...maybe an editor might be handy,,,a decent start,keep up the good work,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This is so refreshing! Anything other than vampires and werewolves are refreshing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This story is great.

It's a brilliant take on the traditional 'demon' idea, and it has a great storyline as well.

FaithWhiteFaithWhiteover 10 years ago
Re-reading it is good

Lol. Without realizing it I picked this story to read & only half way did I realize I had read it before. Still just as good as the first time round.

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