by Reddestiny921
This was an interesting beginning to this story.
What is Cassandra's background and was this event foreseen.
A good start to what appears to be a good series, hope to see more like this.
I enjoyed the start and very much would like to read more so don't stop writing. You write very well.
Love the ideas coming through.
Yes,its a new twist on things for sure,will keep reading just to see where this goes.Your placement of comma's makes the reading a bit confusing,have them were they arent needed and dont have them where they are...maybe an editor might be handy,,,a decent start,keep up the good work,,,
This is so refreshing! Anything other than vampires and werewolves are refreshing!
It's a brilliant take on the traditional 'demon' idea, and it has a great storyline as well.
Lol. Without realizing it I picked this story to read & only half way did I realize I had read it before. Still just as good as the first time round.