by varunv765
This story is excellent! It was imaginatively conceived and masterfully crafted. I gave it a 5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜)!
Arthi's character deserves a
5.25 = 105% "above expectations."
In my book, this is a very good story.
Women make the world go round!
Each woman is entitled to her place under the sun.
Women make this world a happier place.
Arthi is one of those women!
Still waiting for an Indian BTB. Guess they have to wait not husband dies.
varunv765,
Thank you for this story!
It's a pitty you did not write ch. 2.
The story is erotic and poetic.
It describes sex but not in a cheap way. Sex is beautiful. Sex with a married woman is beautiful too, plus it has an extra dimension.
Some men have stronger-than-average voyeur tendencies. When they realize another man fancies their wife they get turned on big time.
If a married woman has a fling without a scandal, it can be good for her, her lover and her husband. She will be better in bed & enjoy sex more profoundly.
Needless to say i gave you 5 stars.
Varun:
The female characters you create are almost alive and are irresistibly appealing. Thank you.
i could not say no to a woman like Arthi.
Varun is the luckiest man in Mumbai.
If Arthi welcomed me to the neighborhood i would not believe my eyes. i'd think i m dreaming.
Arthi is a keeper and her husband is the second luckiest man in Mumbai.
Nice cuddlesome dear and very good writing. It reminded me of my own start of fucking with a mother of four my very own maternal uncles wife. she was also a very fair and a well filled out lady having good heavy breasts and nice broad buttocks. It brought back pleasant memories. Thanks keep on writing.