All Comments on 'My New Computer'

MBF knew a little too much about Bedman going into their exchange.

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Worse, there is nothing about the actual confrontation between the author and his wife.

I have to disagree with the other posters so far. I think if they read the intro they would have realized it was not going to be a story but something factual. I like that you didn't put it into story form and soften it up - real life happens and it often isn't all roses. Your anger, shock and hurt are all summed up nicely at the end - I hope for you it was a sense of closure and that your life it better now.

take care.

real life event, the other two both had valid critiques but lest go further. The writer states he is 33 to 40 in his bio so in that event he had to be born in 1968 or later. It the supposed IM transcript he states his wife at 26 started fucking the guy in 1981 so that puts her birthdate around 1955, hmm an older woman. He also states that they divorced in 1999 after 29 years of marriage, if my math is near right that makes them married in 1970 when he was at most 2. My, my, that wife is a real cradle robber. Writer the realism is in the details, make them good. You wrote and interesting transcript but messed up in the details. Work at bit harder at it. RB

if the details (numbers, names, etc.) are illogical, then the action is irrelevant, for me (and clearly for a few others as well.) Yes, the point of this sight is to acheive, maintain, and/or relieve sexual excitement... I will give you that. But you must keep in mind that the readers chose this format over the readily available visual variety. Therefore, we insist upon logic in the very least. If the writer is disinterested in the logistics, why should the reader care?

Well one of many reasons why I don't date or get married

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