All Comments on 'My New Life'

I fail to understand the placement of this story into the incest category. But, more importantly, you need to go beyond just putting the concept of your story down on paper. Once it is written in rough draft (which probably is beyond what you did even) you need to go back over it time and again and polish it. If you don't have the ability to self-edit, enlist the help of a volunteer editor. But, thanx for your attempt

This has to be a joke! No punctutaion (speech) marks - and only an outline of story - certainly not Incest - and not funny!

Lukas

Poorly written; wrong category; bad punctuation. This is clearly NOT your calling.

Good story, but isn't it in the wrong section?

horribly written! and this isn't incest at all! plus how hard is it to include " " ?