by Beatnic_jazzman
What was THC?
It has been mentioned twice in the story with no definition? Do they mean canabis?
Could you pleasse clarify.
Thanks
Some how I figured there was more to this. Yet you did do a good job on hitting the timing perfect. Shit Is going to go to the fan now. No more little dirty securits and goverment lies.....LOL! This caught them with the pants down Litterly HAHAHAHA.
Now the questions is.
How will this all work together? Plus will vince leave him now? What mistories lay in store for our would hero's LOL...?
Hopefuly about three page long would be nice....
Great job..
Like Ringworld, this did seem to end abruptly but it was at a logical point.
Great story. Since im an old school SciFi buff i eventually found myself scrolling past the sexytimes stuff to get more of the story. How much am a geek am I? And it explains why I dont get laid often LOL
Very good story! I read the whole thing in one sitting, it reminds me of some of Robert Heinlein's works. I'd REALLY like to see this expanded into a full length novel.
I can't do better and it was unputdownable. However, the sex doesn't seem to click with the story. Both the sf and the sex are great but it's like two different stories. Maybe if the robot vincent had been able to enhance their love n sex....
Fine story, nice setup, but the ending? A few paragraphs to wrap it up? Got sick of the story I guess. Still gave it 5 for effort.