All Comments on 'My New Pet Robot 08'

by Beatnic_jazzman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fun!

Didn't see that coming, looking forward to meeting everyone!

mickymouse113mickymouse113about 11 years ago
THC

What was THC?

It has been mentioned twice in the story with no definition? Do they mean canabis?

Could you pleasse clarify.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Ghost

Some how I figured there was more to this. Yet you did do a good job on hitting the timing perfect. Shit Is going to go to the fan now. No more little dirty securits and goverment lies.....LOL! This caught them with the pants down Litterly HAHAHAHA.

Now the questions is.

How will this all work together? Plus will vince leave him now? What mistories lay in store for our would hero's LOL...?

Hopefuly about three page long would be nice....

Great job..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Abrupt ending

Like Ringworld, this did seem to end abruptly but it was at a logical point.

WetCoyoteWetCoyotealmost 10 years ago
Woah...

Great story. Since im an old school SciFi buff i eventually found myself scrolling past the sexytimes stuff to get more of the story. How much am a geek am I? And it explains why I dont get laid often LOL

Crazy_coyoteCrazy_coyoteover 9 years ago
Nice one!

Very good story! I read the whole thing in one sitting, it reminds me of some of Robert Heinlein's works. I'd REALLY like to see this expanded into a full length novel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great stuff

I can't do better and it was unputdownable. However, the sex doesn't seem to click with the story. Both the sf and the sex are great but it's like two different stories. Maybe if the robot vincent had been able to enhance their love n sex....

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please *eye roll*

Fine story, nice setup, but the ending? A few paragraphs to wrap it up? Got sick of the story I guess. Still gave it 5 for effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Excellent

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