All Comments on 'My Niece's Husband... The Cop'

For a debut this was pretty good, I hope you do continue....

Please continue, this is a good first attempt and will get better with editing and practice

Is it your niece's husband or your best friend's husband..?

Confused is he your Friends Husband or your Nephew? Re-read your work before posting. This is a good start I'll give you a 3

a niece's husband is not making it incest stories.

As the other commentators have said there are silly errors that you should have found when you re read it. Her hands are in handcuffs so how can she stroke his cock ?

No, YOU learn what it means. Just use Google for a few seconds.

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In addition, what part of TABOO is too complex for your so-called brain?

Yeah, it COULD be both, but as written it's ambiguous.

Thank you for all the comments. I sent two different versions to someone to look over. I believe I got them intertwined somehow. Ido apologize and will absolutely be sure to look at it with a fine tooth comb next time.

great story. When are you posting part 2?

Can't wait to read the next one!

I loved the story! Better than mine! You are very good!

It would help greatly to have an editor but as a first story I'd say you did a wonderful job. And it was hot! I wouldn't mind helping you edit.