by NaughtyVisions
ok it was a really good story I gotta say, but where is her brother this whole time?
Any ways good story.
i've not been able read rest thus far ..... ..... ..... .....
NOW DO SOMETHING LIKE - - - The Hall Of Doom [ of course
different aspects about everything ]
NOW DO SOMETHING LIKE - - - Justice League Headquarters
" of course different aspects about everything "
NOW DO SOMETHING LIKE - - - Avengers Tower [ of course
different aspects about everything ]
NOW DO SOMETHING LIKE - - - Barad -dur " of course
different aspects about everything " {` lord of the rings `} i've needed
google the name headquarters
THE FORCE IT'S STRONG W/~YOU COMPLETELY MY SON
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha BECAUSE HOW
PHENOMENALLY AWESOME YOU'VE DONE THIS STORY
AS LONG AS EVERYTHING'S DONE CORRECTLY
THESE IDEAS ABSOLUTE BLOCKBUSTERS have fun
create everything good luck P.S. i've not given any these ideas
not anywhere except here until now
excellent + fantastic & awesome + sensational & phenomenal .............
you made everyyyyythinggggg absolute perfection sooooooooooooooo
perfectly written every ordeal every aspect every piece every portion
WE'RE NOT DEALING W/~JUST ORDINARY APPRENTICE
WE'RE NOT DEALING W/~JUST CERTAIN JEDI
WE'RE DEALING W/~SOMEBODY THAT UNDERSTANDS HOW
LITERALLY USE THE FORCE ......................... i've didn't read thee
entire story just yet did read about1/2thestoryabout
Perhaps I am nerdy but I love the direction you took with this story. The daughters reaction to ridning out who Vader was was priceless, elegant and left allt of room for imagination