All Comments on 'My One Big Affair Ch. 02'

by Catmoore

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kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 12 years ago

Good story Cat, but then, you seldom disappoint do you? I particularly liked the mental picture painted of you in your stockings 'n suspenders, short skirt and high heels as you go off to meet your lover to be fucked. Lucky man or what!! xx

Alleykat86Alleykat86almost 12 years ago
This was a great idea

It was well written too, but there was no real substance to it. In the

End she just comes off as a slut with a nice husband that she doesn't

Deserve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Two losers ...

unfaithful low lives who deserve one another. Too bad they don't have to face each other 24 X 7, which I'm sure would be a real eye-opening trauma for them both.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Cuckolds like Kennyboy will of course love this story. But Cat tell us readers what is so erotic about cheating and disrespecting a husband that has apparently done nothing wrong? if you really hate your husband some much divorce him your lover is an asshole just as much as you are an asshole. In part 3 write how you both divorced your partners and how they fell in love with each other and lived a long time very happily with many kids and grandkids while you got many kids from many different men and your lover pimped you out and then left you when you were old and grey. That would be a great story.

deadeye_76deadeye_76almost 12 years ago
Nicely done

I don't know what the others are talking about. This sounds so much like the musings and consternations that everyone who is mostly a good person goes through when they do something so wrong as cheat on their spouse. I think it's especially truthful when she talks about how some people will feel like they might be falling in love with someone who they are getting to know, as if this new rendezvous has awakened all the coy, teasing, getting-to-know-each-other trappings that they initially went through with their lifetime spouse. It's not a pretty picture, but it sounds so close to the truth, I almost wonder if this is totally autobiographical. I'm not sure there is much fiction here.

Sidney43Sidney43almost 12 years ago

I gave you four stars for the writing, but I hate the bitch of a wife character. She is actually thinking she should cut off sex with her husband while she is having an affair? I really don't have much stomach for reading the rest of the story, but I hope she gets her just rewards in the end, but I doubt you will write it that way. The rest of my comments were deleted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

There is nothing redeeming about either character. Of course that is usually par for the course when two people engage in an affair. But it is realistic in that both are waxing poetic notions about what basically boils down to deception and deceit. It's like the honeymoon stage in a relationship, it's all new and exciting...and then it gets real. Poth are lying to their spouses, neglecting family obligations, it's bound to get real real fast.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
If they both are sure

If they both are sure about how they feel about each other; let them divorce their wife and husband. It is obvious that there is no love or respect for their spouses. This whore is thinking that she is cheating on the person she is cheating with when she have sex with her husband. She must be brainless or functionally brain dead.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
affair

I think Cat's approach has been messed up from the start. At least she could of communicated to her husband to attempt to give her more time and attention and to make a special effort several times a month. That said Cat felt awful for having sex, which was wonderful at the time with Richard and then felt like she was cheating on her lover Jack. She felt since she was unfaithful to her spouse during that affair time she shouldn't have sex with her spouse. Now that is logic. How about the five kids involved let alone the two cheated upon spouses. Feeling like she was cheating on her lover because of having sex with hubby has just blown my mind. Now granted this is just a story and you write extremely well but that rational just turned me off to the story. Thanks for all your submissions but this one justblew me out of the water.

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