All Comments on 'My Own Princess Di Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
weakly written, but good topic

It comes across a little too quickly. Keep working at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
MORE!!

Hello, Thought the story was great, I really am looking forward to stage two. Please do not leave it to long.

Gary

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good stuff, but stretch it out a bit pls..

Keep going. Very exciting stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
gimme!!

Was great. love the potential for more - as gary said, don't leave it too long!!!

shiela

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
So what happened to Ch.02?

Two years? Guess you lost interest: pity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Eh

Woman is singular, women is plural. True story? Works more for comedians than writers of erotica! Lastly, stories of control-play is much more exciting when the man is not married. Otherwise it's just creepy.

Anonymous
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