All Comments on 'My Pet, My Prey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Interesting

Nice work here. Character names could be an improvement. The way this story is ended leaves me thinking that there could be more on the way. If so, I'd elaborate more on what she is and what hes wants from her man.

jonmartin22jonmartin22about 15 years ago
and!!....

please tell me that is not then end! I was just getting into it!

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