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by OralDave

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PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 13 years ago
Intriguing

I really like your style of writing and would love to read more. Good luck in the contest.

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieabout 13 years ago

Different, and intriguing.

At first it seemed rather arbitrary, Dave and Annie getting together, but by the end I felt I understood them better.

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I'm a city boy who's migrated to north woods. Not boy-- I'm retired and fit-- I cross country ski, bike, cross country ski, garden-- and write (including a few stories on Lit. But it's lonely here sometimes. Spring is early, it's here, I guess. I'll be able to get...