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by OralDave

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EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieover 13 years ago

Different, and intriguing.

At first it seemed rather arbitrary, Dave and Annie getting together, but by the end I felt I understood them better.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 13 years ago
Intriguing

I really like your style of writing and would love to read more. Good luck in the contest.

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I'm a city boy who's migrated to north woods. Not boy-- I'm retired and fit-- I cross country ski, bike, cross country ski, garden-- and write (including a few stories on Lit. But it's lonely here sometimes. Spring is early, it's here, I guess. I'll be able to get...