All Comments on 'My Rugby Club Bets Ch. 01'

Exquisitely written, delightfully naughty and full of realistic anticipation. Thank you

Sadly, the Health and Safety Nazis have banned the big bath. (Cross Contamination)

Enjoyed the read though. Thanks!

Great story. I can't wait to read more of yours.

I enjoyed the fact that this was saucy but not vulgar, rather in the tradition of 1970s UK sex comedies. Do write more about this young lady's adventures, but try to avoid ending so abruptly.

Thanks for your e-mail, Rian -- so pleased you took my comments in the manner in which they were intended, as constructive feedback, writer to writer. I certainly look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.