All Comments on 'My Secret Confession'

by aliparks

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soul catchersoul catcherover 12 years ago
Well Wrote, Well Told

An enchanting coming of age story. I don't know if the tell is real, but you made it feel real. I wish all the best in your search for writing skills. You appear to have a good start. Keep on plugging. -- Oh yes thanks for suggesting readers support ALL the writers, not just you. You are a class act. = SC =

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Make MaMa Proud

Slutty Mom brings home a dude that she can share with her little girl. Thanks. Mom for helping become the whore of a woman that you are!

kingleonidasskingleonidassover 12 years ago
Wow nice.

Very believable story line. Keep writing. I don t know why some people think they have to dis the content. It s a story people if you don t like the content or have a moral issue don t read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hell yeah...

I liked it baby girl, very nice detail. Brings back a fond memory for me that happened not so different from this story. Achorage huh? as in Alaska? wow. The only thing I can say is that i wanted to know more about mom. but other then that it was fantastic! I see that your writing is already getting better from your two previous stories. You're a quick learner - keep it up.

SharpguySharpguyover 12 years ago
Nice!

Well told tale. Reminded me of a time way back when I was fortunate to spend an evening with my girlfriend's mom. We never told her, but always had a special smile between us whenever I was over at their house. THANKS for the memories; your story brought back some great emotions.

jaycoltjaycoltover 12 years ago
Well done!!!

I really enjoyed this coming of age story. It got me aroused more than once and that is great! Keep up the great writing!

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 12 years ago
Very hot!

Forbidden fruit is always tastier! Nicely done.

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