by aliparks
I really enjoyed this coming of age story. It got me aroused more than once and that is great! Keep up the great writing!
Well told tale. Reminded me of a time way back when I was fortunate to spend an evening with my girlfriend's mom. We never told her, but always had a special smile between us whenever I was over at their house. THANKS for the memories; your story brought back some great emotions.
I liked it baby girl, very nice detail. Brings back a fond memory for me that happened not so different from this story. Achorage huh? as in Alaska? wow. The only thing I can say is that i wanted to know more about mom. but other then that it was fantastic! I see that your writing is already getting better from your two previous stories. You're a quick learner - keep it up.
Very believable story line. Keep writing. I don t know why some people think they have to dis the content. It s a story people if you don t like the content or have a moral issue don t read it.
Slutty Mom brings home a dude that she can share with her little girl. Thanks. Mom for helping become the whore of a woman that you are!
An enchanting coming of age story. I don't know if the tell is real, but you made it feel real. I wish all the best in your search for writing skills. You appear to have a good start. Keep on plugging. -- Oh yes thanks for suggesting readers support ALL the writers, not just you. You are a class act. = SC =