All Comments on 'My Sister Shannon Pt. 01'

I hate stories that leave you hanging. I'll probably never read another of yours for fear it will happen again.

It does say part 1, you know

And of course, nobody EVER submits a story with the intention of continuing it ...and then never does. I call that, "I can do that. Wait a minute. Hey, this is hard!"

I found myself extremely aroused by this story from the beginning. It had me stroking right along with our protagonist "Chris", early on in the tale. I love where this is going, and can't wait for Pt. 2! I only wish I had a sister like Shannon!

and hope that Chris & Shannon do a lot more than tease and jerk off: bareback, come inside vaginal and anal sex. Bonus points if she is not on birth control.

36G Could not read any further.

Thanks for the comments! I've already started part 2. I may be new to Literotica, but I've been writing erotica and adult fiction for over 15 years, mostly known for my adult interactive fiction games, so no concern that I'm just a fly-by-night author who's going to disappear!

In regards to what is in store, the teasing will build to a hot conclusion, though the story is more about the taboo nature of the teasing.

And for the person commenting on the 36G bra size, I'm not sure if you don't like big boobs or just think 36G is too big. If the latter, I suggest you google 36G... big but not unrealistic! :)

Realistic story, many guys have done similar things with sister's underwear. Often sis like to tease bro and get him aroused and know he will be jerking off. It is all in good fun.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I hope she gives more

That was pretty hot! Can't wait for the continuation!

Very good beginning. Can't wait for part 2. Some guys just don't know that boobs can go beyond DDs...

Great Story! Keep it up. Like that your building it up and not jumping straight into it. Cant wait for Part 2!

Yes, a hot n' horny sister who knows how to turn a guy on and almost push the boundaries! Of course, she knows her brother is very aroused and I think that turns her on too. Hopefully, she'll want to push him over the edge too. Who knows where this will go. Thanks.

LOVED this chapter!! I used to work with a girl named Shannon who had huge tits too!!!! I pictured her while reading this and got so hard and horny!!!! Keep up the great work!!

For a look at what inspired me for Shannon’s dance, do a search for Carly Holt Military Shirt Dance.

Loved it! Fucking hot!! On to chapter two. Five stars and a favorite point.

Good premise.

But just a setup.

Four stars.

Too much of a cock tease. 1*

Interesting premise.

A good beginning, but too short. It didn't really get anywhere except as a tease for more teasing.

Four stars.