All Comments on 'My Slave Wife'

This story is so fucking hot jesus christ my pussy is ready to explode at the thought of being a mans slave

I enjoyed the story. I love reading stories about women who wear no panties or Directoire Knickers. I also enjoy women who are pierced, especially in their cunt area. I like pussy rings with a small chain with a small bell attached to them so that as they walk, the bells ring.

I also enjoy pissing, especially women who just let it run down their legs. No need to wipe pubic hair either.

Hope you publish a sequel.

I'd like to contact you. My writers name is jhmckn.

if anyone can get nipple piercings, should go for it!

This story is horrible. No build up to anything. Just straight bullshit slave nonsense. No character development. Don't care about either one of them. Bad writing.

Very exciting. However from my point of view I would have pushed my wishes much further. Wearing all the day long a buttplug. Forcing her to have daily sex with one of my friends by agreeing to be internally creampied, of course pill use forbidden. If she gets knocked up, she will be sent as prostitute in a brothel and get me a lot of money.

At least once a week she has to be gangbanged by no less than 10 men. I would get her used to lesbian intercourse on my request and no doubt having several sex actions with dogs in front of my friends.

You Definitely need someone to Edit your work. I'm also guessing the Author may have been a teenager too, just guessing. As they knew where the important parts were but had no idea what to do with them. To make this story worthy of the Effort to read it, some Explosive sex Scenes in it, maybe knowing what would happen with them could have helped too..

Well....

Not impressed rly!

The author I guess couldn't decide if he wanted a public sex slave or a slave wife so he went for a mix of both... & not in a good way!

No sex, no character development nothing.