All Comments on 'The Holiday Ch. 02'

I really liked this; there will probably be those who don't. My advice is to ignore the bad comments and keep writing. This was pretty damn good, especially for a first story and I have awarded it five stars. Thank you for posting and welcome to Literotica.

I love it, especially how he thinks he has a choice in mattes when in reality she is in charge

I appreciate a well written story whenever I see one. This isn't really my cup'o'tea, but I enjoyed reading his struggle. I would have liked the backstory, (Why is he in chastity after what seems was a long healthy prior relationship?)

Fill in the gaps please.

So far so good

Thanks

5 stars

Great story! Thanks for sharing. I agree a little background info would be nice. Hope to see more soon

j

I know i'm parroting the anon who said he'd like more back story but it's hard to be interested in a story that you don't understand the personal dynamic. i gave you 4 stars because i think its written well, but needs more work.

keep going

Crush the cage, grab the camera and delete the pictures. She gives you any static, break her finger, then another if necessary to remove the pictures. Then throw the bitch out. No problem. You really imagine any man this pathetic?

Good story but I would not have left him out of his cage. I would have fucked his ass with a toy to work his prostate to make him leak and drip goo out of his sore blue balls. Also, let her lover unload in her pussy for sissy boi to clean up. Plus she would be loosening his tight ass/pussy some for the day when his sweet boi ass is used by two or three bi studs. Bi studs love to fuck tight twink boi pussy. Breed them. In time after being locked up he will start to leak and drip goo all the time. But when cage comes off, milk him dry then make him eat it all.