All Comments on 'My Swinging Life Ch. 01'

Please be more considerate of your readers and give them something worth reading.

I dont understand why writers feel the need to write a few hundred words of almost nothing and call it part 1 or chapter 1.

Post your story when you are done, we are smart enough to read it without having it cut into meaningless little pieces

I'm sorry to offend those that don't like the story. It was my first attempt, but I know all the kind critisim does alot for someones esteem.

I wanted to thank you for your story. I have had this fantasy before, but yours had a twist. I hope that you continue to enjoy your sexuality and write about it.