by lollipop_beware
I wanted to thank you for your story. I have had this fantasy before, but yours had a twist. I hope that you continue to enjoy your sexuality and write about it.
I'm sorry to offend those that don't like the story. It was my first attempt, but I know all the kind critisim does alot for someones esteem.
Please be more considerate of your readers and give them something worth reading.
I dont understand why writers feel the need to write a few hundred words of almost nothing and call it part 1 or chapter 1.
Post your story when you are done, we are smart enough to read it without having it cut into meaningless little pieces