by Dynamic_Wisdom
Wow, this needs some editing and grammar work. Hard to understand. What dialetic of English is this?
English is not the author's first language. ...Or maybe it is, in which case I would strongly recommend that they return to Jr. High School before writing anything else. I'm not usually one to be a total grammar nazi when it comes to erotica, but this is almost incomprehensible. Not to mention, the author broke about ten other writing rules. Subject matter and action aside, this story is not good. Sorry.