All Comments on 'My Threesome Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice

I like the idea and execution, good one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hmm well now this is....different.

Wow, this needs some editing and grammar work. Hard to understand. What dialetic of English is this?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
gr8

you 2 sound great together, wish you best of luck and much more fun

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Obviously...

English is not the author's first language. ...Or maybe it is, in which case I would strongly recommend that they return to Jr. High School before writing anything else. I'm not usually one to be a total grammar nazi when it comes to erotica, but this is almost incomprehensible. Not to mention, the author broke about ten other writing rules. Subject matter and action aside, this story is not good. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Sexy story

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