All Comments on 'My Uncle Discovered'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
kind of like a slingshot

you built it up so well but when it came to the sex, it just happened so fast. try to make the sex part longer and worth the read of the build up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good job.

good job. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

That was pretty good

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