All Comments on 'My Vacation with Daddy Ch. 02'

by bigben10inches

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kennyboy82kennyboy82over 8 years ago

Extremely well written story, I suspect there's a lot more where this came from.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good

I loved it keep writing

sirhugssirhugsover 8 years ago
Wanted more of Faye and Lexi

once they left it felt like a very conventional paint by numbers Dad/daughter story- which is not a bad thing, but the first half was elevated into something truly special, so the rest felt like a let down. Still worthy of a "5" though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
couldnt stop whacking

such a good story wanna read more makes my cock hard maybe a foursum with the dad and girls so wanna fuck the girls asses

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
I'm confused!

So why didn't you just start this story with this chapter, then make what is chapter 1 be chapter 2??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I am also confused. In the first chapter, you say she slept with one of her teachers when she was a freshmen. In this chapter, you say her father takes her virginity. Perhaps, another reason you should have started with this chapter.

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