by bigben10inches
Extremely well written story, I suspect there's a lot more where this came from.
once they left it felt like a very conventional paint by numbers Dad/daughter story- which is not a bad thing, but the first half was elevated into something truly special, so the rest felt like a let down. Still worthy of a "5" though.
such a good story wanna read more makes my cock hard maybe a foursum with the dad and girls so wanna fuck the girls asses
So why didn't you just start this story with this chapter, then make what is chapter 1 be chapter 2??
I am also confused. In the first chapter, you say she slept with one of her teachers when she was a freshmen. In this chapter, you say her father takes her virginity. Perhaps, another reason you should have started with this chapter.