All Comments on 'My Wife and the Teenager Pt. 03'

by Calvin427

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
The story seemed a little wordy or drawn out

Is the author only going to have her and the young chap couple with her, just one time before he ends the story? I would hope not. The story has taken a lot of time just on teasing the young fellow,it would be such a waste to have her fucked only once by the stud. I hope that the next chapter has some forward progress.Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nicely worked out story

This series isnt for the semi-literate, who will try to bury it under a pile of zeroes. Dont get discouraged by these morons. Keep writing! A high score and quality dont go together.

FunseeeekrrFunseeeekrrover 14 years ago
The old story of

If you've got it, flaunt it. Every time I get the opportunity to show a little breast of flash of my semi sheer panties, it give me a thrill to know that the guys, and some girls will leer.

JorachJorachover 14 years ago
Awesome buld-up, as always

It's nice to know that they are great authors like you around who appreciate the details and build-up requisite for a truly erotic story.

It's not all wham, bam, thank you ma'am. Please do keep writing more of these marvelous stories.

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
Consequences

Why worry about consequences? You have provided the extra bed and privacy for continued fucking from Bryce for when you are at work and he needs to fuck her. Perhaps they can start an affair where they will be fucking most of the time and she gets pregnant with Bryce's baby?

jamesinspainjamesinspainalmost 14 years ago
Good

Well written and erotic. Thank you.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

A full cast including a child, an old whore, and of course the feckless cuck.

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