All Comments on 'My Wife Judy Got what She Wanted'

Did you get what you wanted? And what was it you wanted, a mouth full of some other man's slop leaking out of her cunt?

Sounds to me like you both got what you wanted.

Please find an editor. Much more proof reading would be helpful as well. The basics might be there but they're covered up with sloppy presentation.

The world of Lit is full of short women that weigh 105 and have double D tits. This story really needs to be edited and then reconsidered.

Damn, isn't that fresh. Never, ever been done before.

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

You need an editor.

If the wife's name is Judy, why does Baako call her Brandy? You cum in your wife and you "exploited"? Don't you mean exploded?

The purpose here is creating an engaging, entertaining story. The objective in not including every sex act you can think of into a 3/4 page story.

I'm sorry but its a 2* for me.

ugly dumb fat cream pie eating fag comments from the asshole of LIT! dear annony!!

Please stop writing or read what you wrote before posting...

It really pulls the reader out of the story when you are misspelling words and continuously switching tense

My favorite is when the author broke into Pirate - "Inch be inch."

Cant any of these so called authors write. Where did all the great story tellers go. All we have is a bunch of closet fags

Baako is actually a Ghanaian female name.

And what is a massage polar?

There were lots of other spelling and grammatical errors that an editor would help you get rid of.

You know that old saying about opening your mouth and proving you're stupid. In your case it's your writing. Or should I say illiteracy. 1*

Judy a selfish bitch at the behest of her willing cuckold husband, it doesn't matter black or white I don't get a husband wanting some other male fuck his wife. I generally think that the cuck has a pea sized brain situated in his cock end.

By the way get yourself a proof reader who understands the English language because you don't.

It lacked any originality at all.

Simplistic (as the minds of most cucks actually are so your stories are expected to be short of Shakespearian) to a fault.

We have had some who rival the simplistic, effort lacking story telling these days, who do it under several names, and you write just like the King himself does. Not a compliment.