All Comments on 'My Wife Robyn Fantasy Ch. 02'

Just admit it, your wife is a fantasy you don't actually have one.

Or a subscription to a dating website ?

This fantasy is again just to get an online lover? That last sentence killed the story like in part 1...It isn't about his wife anymore!!! More because he says during the story: "I knew what she wanted as we've done this before.!!!". If so this wasn't a fantasy anymore, but a reality!!! 1*

good effort

"5

good effort"

The funniest contribution to Literotic that I've seem in ages.

u sick perverted fag, you sound fat and geeky i bet you masterbate to porn every day u looser

a pile of dung

If you plan on ever making your writing good (or even mediocre), you need to read a book. Read something that has been edited, then read yours. Your writing lacks many things including a variety in your word choice. Go back to your document and find out how many times you said 'moan'. I'm thinking that it's at least 20.

....the way you wrote it, Robyn has either gotten recent experience else here, or this is not her first ass-rodeo.

It would make the hair on my neck stand tall.

It's amazing how people can write negative nasty comments then are cowards by being anonymous. Guess the lives of these anonymous people really suck and are losers so they have to try to bring people down to their level.

Why not provide constructive help? Guess these anonymous readers are such lousy writers that they have write comments in an attempt to bring people down to their low-life level.

These comments sound like one people submitting numerous anonymous comments.

I've read far more stories on this site that are not as good as this one. But I won't bring the writer down by leaving nasty negative comments.

Maybe this anonymous commenter is actually jealous?

Looked at your bio. Low and behold it doesn't say a fucking thing about you, and you call anonymous losers. Look in the mirror and see what a loser looks like. Staring right at you. Tell us dickhead what really is bothering you?

Were you making chili? That would have to be better than this story.

Boring 😴👎👎👎