All Comments on 'MySore Escapades!'

by limasu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 stars

Interesting, well written and erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
3 stars

Very erotic but somewhat abrupt, left me in an odd state

merrySMmerrySMabout 1 year ago

Hot, hot, hot.

Great action, moved the story along quite well, felt his shame, humiliation and pain.

Get an editor (im available) as you had a few tense and spelljng errors. But please keep writing.

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I am an amateur writer trying to channelize my fantasies through my words and hope everyone enjoys living them with me!