All Comments on 'Naked Daughter'

this is so hotttt

Learn better grammar please!

It's obvious English is not your first language, why did you write it it? This is ...fucking terrible, your command of English is far below what you obviously believe it to be, please don't write any more, this was agonizing to read through. No stars

Gross! Me and my colleague? This may sell back in a rural village in India, but nowhere else. Don't write here anymore.

This could have been hot, but was so lost because of the writing and ugh, lack of editing.

No grammar, no editing, some parts it was hard to read. English isnt your first language obviously but there are editing sites online. Please don't write anymore.

Wow. Y'all are mean. I hope you keep writing. Sure, you could use a little grammar help, but never allow mistakes to hinder you from trying. Especially not when the discouragement is coming from anonymous scared bullies on the internet. Ignore the grammar Nazis. Write if you want. It wasn't a bad story.

Extraordinary but good.

Loved it, thinking of your daughter being fucked by other men while your cock is buried deep in her pussy and your wife is being fucked to pay of a bet even though she is reluctant to have this man’s cock inside her and additionally knowing you gave him permission to cum inside her. I also love that you thought of impregnating your daughter in the future.