by urbanslut
Mumbai Indian or Delhi DareDevils whom are you supporting? Anyways, a good story. Enjoyed it.
LOL! I almost saw that end coming... :)
I'd have put the same twisted ending.
VERY WELL WRITTEN. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. WANT TO READ MORE OF THIS SPECIALLY WHEN IT IS WRITTEN IN INDIAN BACKGROUND. KEEP THEM COMMING.
It is an excellent story. I really liked the narration very much especially the twist in the end. The twist in the end made the story really interesting, otherwise it would have been the same old story with a new name.
Keep writing, you have a excellent sense of what is erotic.