All Comments on 'Natasha- We Meet Again!'

by spikingtheworld

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Decent Start

Awkward structure, but I get the concept- pretty cool if it works for you (even if it doesn't-LOL!)

I can tell there is a lot of tortured soul in the writing.

"Natasha" must be amazing and lucky to have garnered such an interest.

Good luck on the experiment Spike, looking forward to reading the next installment,

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Needs more

Needs more PVC or latex in it like when you saw her she was dressed in sexy leather biker jacket

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