All Comments on 'Native American Nympho Stoner Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Slow start, better finish

I realize you are trying to provide much detail, but seems it went over the line into too much detail. "slightly over 4.5 years older" about turned me off from what was a good finish.

completeexperiencecompleteexperienceover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the constructive comment; you made a good point and I'll keep that in mind when writing future chapters! I just submitted chapter two this morning and am now almost done writing chapter three!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Total Disrespect of Native Americans!

Total Disrespect of Native Americans!

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 11 years ago
Gee a complaint about the story not being PC!

I wonder if the commenter actually read the story. I find the story and the characters fairly well done but will have to read more. Being part Native American I understand the way some will fill, but I have not found anything to complain about yet other then the title

ElizabethOliverfieldsElizabethOliverfieldsover 11 years ago

Very beautiful. Makes me want to find a Butch myself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wrong category

This story is well written but in the wrong category. Traditionally, Romances at Literotica are much softer, where the story is much more of an Erotic Coupling type thing, with the "fucksticks" and casual sex. Just a suggestion, since I read the latest chapter and thought that was also in the wrong category. Like I said, the story itself it fine. The PC complaints are baseless.

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