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All Comments on 'Nature's Winter Treat'

by Julard

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sacksackover 15 years ago
This is way way way way too fast....

And in your hurry you leave out details that would add suspense to the story and make it more coherent. Idealy, this should have a little more to do with the Holiday season. Yes, there was a Christmas party, but could this story have taken place verbatim at other times of the year?

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