All Comments on 'Naughty Games: Shower and a 69'

would of liked it if you started the story from how/when/why they first got together

You can tell where my mind is at. Not quite up to the level of the first one, but close. While the conversation does build the characters, it isn't terribly sexy. It feels a little slow to me. I still gave you 5 stars, but I expect some butt fucking in the next chapter! :-)