All Comments on 'Naughty Neighbour'

by KiltedWelshman

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chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 8 years ago
well, pretty good

Kind of a sudden ending. What was lacking was some character development. Next to nothing about either one of them or their spouses. Maybe OK for Erotic Coupling, but LW generally values some drama and conflict.

Chilley

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

"Loving Wives" and "Erotic Coupling" when a married man fucks off. What kind of macho shit is that?

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