All Comments on 'Naughty Nikka Ch. 02'

Another good story. keep on writng the stories are so hot

Erica,I knew you would make it,with your background you could hardly fail.

Good plot and all but the intermingled spanish in there really took away from the story. Either write it al in spanish for the mexicanos or write in english for all to enjoy.

Beautiful work as always honey. Please don't ever stop or listen to the rude people on the site. You are very sexy talented writer.

xxoo,

Cheryl

I liked the mixture of spanish and english in the first two chapters. whomever said write it in one language.....SCREW THAT! Keep writing.

Wow, fantastic storyline, loved it to completion. Keep me up with the great work. Thanks

I'm from So Cal also and find it very sexy hearing the mix of latina dirty talk in your stories. Keep it up! Only complaint is that you need to review and edit out the spelling and grammar mistakes, or use an editor, please! It will make your stories even more enjoyable to read. *Kisses"

I disagree with the reviewer who said to write your stories all in one language. Picturing a sexy latina/o huskily moaning in spanish is so freaking hot.

Dear Erica...Another of your HOT fucking stories...Keep them cuming...I love your writing...But check your spelling, maybe get a Franklin Spelling Ace there faster than a conventional dictionary...I believe it was Make Twane who once said something along the line of "I could never trust or admire anyone with so little imagination as to only spell a word one way"...But it does make for better understanding ...

.. it even got hotter !

You must continue that father/daughter adventuring !

I detect a hidden daddy lust in your writing

Hope you get to full fill your fantisey

Great story, I wish you were still writing.

Well ok I can see she is a big whore. Her dad could not satisfy her with his big cock because she needed two guys to fuck her.if she just went with her dad and friend for a threesome then it shows she found what she needed and it would be her dad. Her dad should wear condoms because she will fuck anything. I would put her to work and make money