All Comments on 'Naughty Pines Cabin Ch. 01'

looking forward to this story being continued.

Well written and very "Naughty"

The story finished very abruptly. Seems there would be more to say...

I forgot part 2 is still cuming!

Well, get to it!

Looking forward to part 2

What a great tale. Two horny brothers and a very horny sister. This wonderful story could run and run, pretty please.

A good start

Very good start!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Who will be first

Don't make us wait!

I really enjoyed your story I hope you have more to bring to the table.

Great lead up, no real action,

Alice writes with feeling, takes the time to develop the characters to the point you can almost experience their desires for each other, the building of sexual tension. She tantalizes you, teases you...leaves you yearning for more. To me, that's a really good writer. Lot's of writers can tell you a good tale, when you're done you say 'that was pretty good.'...then you're done. Not with Alice...you are not done, you are hungry for the next installment, you almost want to curse her for making you wait for the next tidbit. Makes you wonder, 'what does Alice taste like?'

Beautiful writing that absolutely sizzles! Consider me a fan.

Great start to a story; hoping that there will be more shortly.

leaving us hanging like that before the really sexy bits start to slide in and out.

Enjoying and appreciating... and now, on to chapter 2.

Very well written story with terrific characters. I'm looking forward to reading everything this author has written.

You naughty girl!!!

truly excellent so far

It could have been a lovely story if you had left the weed totally out of it. 1/5

Cassoulet?? Another new word for me. Thanks for increasing my vocabulary again. I bet this is the first time that word has been used to mean pussy, cunt, or twat.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work. On to the next chapter.

Someone commented, "It could have been a lovely story if you had left the weed totally out of it. 1/5."

Nothing was said about a minor drinking alcohol; another drug. They are intitled to their opinion, but, Really?