All Comments on 'Naughty Pines Cabin Ch. 02'

PLEASE write more! i wanna know more about jams and chris!!

Excellent story. Love the feelings between these 3 as they took her virginity(s) the description of her being fucked was astounding. 5 stars. More

Firelizard

You are a fantastic writer. I have enjoyed your stories and can not get enough.

... and I'll find that favorite button too before i go. Thank you for a ver pleasant half hour.

The only negative was the story is over.

Hope you will have another weekend retreat planned.

Any thoughts of Chris and Violet moving in together?

Please tell me there is more to this story. I love Chris!

I love the three of them together but Chris is my favorite.

Great story teller, great development of characters.

will there be more or is this it

This was fairly well-written. The sex scenes were erotic, but could have used a little more detail and build up. That being said, I still rated both stories five stars, and I will follow you and check out your other stuff.

This is the best mmf story I've read. Hats off to the author. This is great work.

Have you ever tried to turn over on your side while your hands and arms are handcuffed to the bedposts? Even if you have a lot of slack, you can't do it.

There were also a couple of little errors in your grammar.

I gave it four stars.

Or at least provide an update! Waiting for the next chapter...PLEASE

Damn... I loved this. The 3 siblings are amazing. Love the threesome. It's unfortunate James is married though.

I hope you'll write more about this trio.

I'm not gonna criticize your grammar or your spelling not with your imagination. Your stories are brilliant. Your mind is as naughty as mine.

story is brilliant, thank you

typical lit multibanger.

Why did I take so long to find this gem. I think V needs to hear her sister in law's lesbian and orgy fantasy and make it real. More please.. Thank you.

Thanks for sharing.