All Comments on 'Naughty Pines Cabin Ch. 02'

by Alice_Rosaleen

Sort by:
  • 18 Comments
blackknight314blackknight3149 months ago

Thanks for sharing.

ukrainianukrainian12 months ago

Why did I take so long to find this gem. I think V needs to hear her sister in law's lesbian and orgy fantasy and make it real. More please.. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
pretty silly...

typical lit multibanger.

shyspudshyspudalmost 4 years ago

story is brilliant, thank you

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 5 years ago
I LOVE YOU A.R

I'm not gonna criticize your grammar or your spelling not with your imagination. Your stories are brilliant. Your mind is as naughty as mine.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Damn... I loved this. The 3 siblings are amazing. Love the threesome. It's unfortunate James is married though.

I hope you'll write more about this trio.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
please continue!

Or at least provide an update! Waiting for the next chapter...PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Story..... but.......

Have you ever tried to turn over on your side while your hands and arms are handcuffed to the bedposts? Even if you have a lot of slack, you can't do it.

There were also a couple of little errors in your grammar.

I gave it four stars.

DaPistashDaPistashalmost 6 years ago
#1

This is the best mmf story I've read. Hats off to the author. This is great work.

kurinaxkurinaxalmost 6 years ago

This was fairly well-written. The sex scenes were erotic, but could have used a little more detail and build up. That being said, I still rated both stories five stars, and I will follow you and check out your other stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
more ?

will there be more or is this it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love this lady's work

Great story teller, great development of characters.

Meliabug92Meliabug92over 6 years ago
More please

Please tell me there is more to this story. I love Chris!

I love the three of them together but Chris is my favorite.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
One of the best Brother/Sister stories. Love and Tenderness was amazing. Wish I could give you more than 5 STARS.

The only negative was the story is over.

Hope you will have another weekend retreat planned.

Any thoughts of Chris and Violet moving in together?

HillfrogHillfrogover 6 years ago
Ten stars in all...

... and I'll find that favorite button too before i go. Thank you for a ver pleasant half hour.

Kinky_PinataKinky_Pinataover 6 years ago
I want more...

You are a fantastic writer. I have enjoyed your stories and can not get enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent story. Love the feelings between these 3 as they took her virginity(s) the description of her being fucked was astounding. 5 stars. More

Firelizard

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

PLEASE write more! i wanna know more about jams and chris!!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous