All Comments on 'Neighborhood Milf Ch. 04'

I liked the story. It seems that you could get another story out of this premise. Having Lyndsey getting more daring with her "personal time" with her student. How difficult it will be to stay @ 2nd base with Lyndsey's daughter? Could the teacher keep it "teacher/student friends with benefits"?

so hot, forgot the daughters name! but daughter needs to be taught...maybe peeking then joining in? aftter all, cant have a girl with big titties with no cocksucking or handjob skills on the loose.

Welcome back! Love your stories, hope you write more frequently.

Really nice story! I love the concept of a huge titted teacher, getting what she wants out from a guy, and especially her strict attitude! Wonderful buildup and also wonderful how you wrote her to have that "I know you would die to see my boobs-attitude". The only thing missing is the girls, in a sexy, sultry tone announce their bra size, and then just watch as the guy empties away onto her lovely chest or where his dick is at that moment :)

But don't turn this paper in for a grade, when you got it back you wouldn't be able to read it with all the corrections marked up. You would also need to do some editing on the one you have due on the poet Walt Witman (sic).

When they started out, she told him not to worry, as her next class wasn't until that evening, but when they finished, she said, "I have a class that starts in ten minutes." Besides that, in college, classrooms are used by more than one professor, so there was no guarantee that they wouldn't have been interrupted.

While not totally error-free, it is nice to see that your writing skills have improved with time.

Your plots are great and the descriptions you use are wonderful. Tthat makes it all the more frustrating and sad that you seem to refuse to reread your stories or have a competent third party edit or review them. The small errors and inconsistencies in names, times, etc. greatly detract from what could be marvelous stories.

Thanks for sharing.

"... but I know it'll never be serious and I would never countenance a serious relationship between you two since clearly you're a pussyhound otherwise why would you be willing to fuck me while dating her...?"

When he was a high school student John Searle would wag school to see his girlfriend Leora and they went hammer and tongs in the cot - Leora had a fetish for rough sex with John and she loved when he told her to bend over and spread those fucking cheeks and then rammed his bulging rock hard 8 inch long blonde hairy thick cut cock deep inside her hot arse and fill it with steaming hot cock cream

Last Saturday night Marilyn Bourazikas went to a pick up joint in Toorak and was chattered up by a hot looking dark haired guy Mark Dale and after plenty of drinks they went to Maz's place where they drank wine and pashed off which was followed by Maz and Mark undressing each other and Maz rubbing her gigantic pale boobs against Mark's hard muscly jet black hairy chest - this was followed by steamy 69 style oral sex and then Maz lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Mark rammed his hard throbbing 9 inch long jet black hairy thick uncut cock deep inside her hot wet dark hairy cunt which was flooded with a lava flow of rich warm cock cream

When Laurie Knightley was in high school he became intimate with a classmate Klaus Puschenjak and one day after school they went to a football club change room where they kissed and undressed each other and then Laurie went down on his knees and rolled back Klaus's foreskin and took in his mouth the whole of Klaus's hard throbbing 7 inch long blonde hairy thick uncut cock - this was followed by Klaus lovingly caressing Laurie's massive jet black hairy chest and then taking in his mouth Laurie's rock hard bulging 8 inch long jet black hairy thick cut cock and then the horny hot lads jacked each other off followed by an orgy of raw intense bare back fucking

This was a great chapter and I enjoyed it very much. But I need to agree with Ambivalence's comment. If he truly cared for her daughter, I would hope he would have made the right decision and refused her offer, telling her that he could not cheat on her daughter and he would bring up the fact that her daughter would not make it through college as a virgin. If it wasn't him it would be someone else, maybe another professor, and asked her if that was what she wanted for her daughter. But that's just me. I hope this tryst doesn't come back and wap him in the ass like her yardstick. I gave this chapter 5 stars. Well done.

This is a Chapter that should never have been written, It lacks any continuity from the story in the previous chapters. What sexual content it has is so clinical as to be completely non-erotic. And it breaks a fundamental and cardinal rule of university conduct. that any intimate contact between a student and a Professor would lead to immediate dismissal from the University. You are playing on unknown ground without learning the rules. Sorry, but that's how I read it.

World's least believable hero, continues to nail every female in a 50 mile radius with ease. Sure, why not?

This was a fun story, unlikely event that nevertheless could happen in real life. Someone said that most college classrooms are used by many different classes through the day, but there are times when they are not scheduled, so the open period where this tryst took place is not that unusual. And I bet Ms. Hartel knew that. The way you describe the action is intense, and erotic.

What I am finding a little unbelievable is that every middle aged woman within a 50 mile radius of your guy has DD tits and a shaved pussy. There's not one pubic hair in the county. Oy vey!! At least he doesn't have a 10" dick. But in Ms Hartel's case especially, some bush would definitely have been welcome. The magic of redheads is...the red hair, especially if there's a thick patch of it between their thighs. Nothing like watching you fat dick slide in and out of a red haired pussy.

To the big tits/shaved pussy issue, it's like this is a series of porn films, something with a title like "Cul de Sac Housewives," where they all take on the neighborhood young stud. Every one of them with surgically enhanced jugs, and shaved pussy. It's a cliche, and does not reflect the reality of most women.

As some other commenters have noted, you need to proofread your stories a lot better. There will always be gremlins that creep into the finished work-I have over 80 stories on Lit, and I guarantee you will find some error in syntax, spelling, or some other grammatical mishap that's not a typo in every one of them. So, proofread, proofread, proofread. Then do it again, I read mine til I'm sick of them, and still find mistakes. But there's no excuse for letting simple, but jarring errors to make it into the published work-things like "tracks of land"-should be "tracts;" correct usage of their, they're or there; improper use of quotes, as well as a host of others that were in the story. Check your grammar and spelling. Spellchek is a good start, but don't trust it completely.

Consistency is also important. Someone who starts out with C cup tits, does not develop "massive tits" three weeks later when he finally beds her. C's just ain't that big!! Ms Hartel has a "class in the evening," then has to be at a class in ten minutes. Small detail, but one that detracts from the flow of the story.

And for God's sake, do your research!!! Witman??? WITMAN???? Really???? The internet makes possible checking the correctness of just about everything. This is not some obscure scientific topic-it's the name of one of America's most well known poets. He's easy to find, even without the internet. Walt WHITMAN!!!!! This is eighth grade stuff, and easily checked. NO EXCUSE for getting this wrong.

I know this is critical, but stay at it, keep writing. You develop a story well, and your descriptions of the action are quite arousing. You just need to get in the habit of reading your work over before posting, and checking factual information. Practice and proofread.

I love the series, but remember -- spell check is no substitute for proofreading. You have used the wrong word in a few places.

Why does everyone write about cowards? Dude can screw married women without a thought but can’t take a punishment from teacher?

Giant breast giant breast giant breast. Come on maybe a tad bit of reality. Hearing every women he ever sees has humongous tits is gettting tiresome. Even mothers don’t all have big tits.

Great Love Story

@dispatcher59 - Please keep in mind this is fiction. Whether it's Witman or Whitman shouldn't bother anyone on literotica.com. A teacher of English, I saw the errors you point out and others as well. I sent a private message to the author so as not to annoy the other readers with my corrections.

Variation of the women needed.

So much fucking bullshit. Nut anywhere except in a fucking pussy!!!!

Couldn't get into this one. Teacher is a controlling BITCH!

The second time she slapped him with the yardstick I would have grabbed it from her &slapped her tits hard with it. He was in the catbird’s seat & needed to let her know that while fucking he’d use her given name & she’d treat me with respect.

If she gave me a hard time I’d tell her daughter I couldn’t date her any longer & explain just why.

No pussy is worth the disrespect she was dishing out.

2 stars because of that.

Bill S.

She’s a bitch. He needs to be asserting to keep his manhood. In any case her choice of location was totally stupid considering what she would face if caught. Nonsense.

Bill S.

Spelling is improved over the first couple of chapters, but this one slipped a bit too far from reality for me.

don't recall him getting a look at bush the other night...crying shame she shaved it off..

Chris gets baited and mastered (mistresses). Hot action. Great addition to this series!

Don't have her involved in sex with him again she was way too much of a domantrex people like her don't get off from the sex they get off on the pain they give the person there fucking

Time problems

“My next class isn’t until this evening.”

“I have a class that starts in 10 minutes.”

Since when is 7 inches a monster? I mean it's a bit bigger than average, sure, but I thought 9-10+ was "monster" territory.

Anyway Ms. Hartel is a controlling slut that uses terrible shitty excuses to steal her daughter's boyfriend for her own uses while trying to make sure she can't get fucked. I really hope he fucks her too and rubs it in but I doubt it. And ruined the build up by not pumping her full of cum. Pitiful. The guy has no fucking backbone I swear.

Love it! Love the way Ms. Hartel changes from rigid prude to sex-crazed slut.