All Comments on 'Neighborly Relations Pt. 01'

by R_D_Eddy

Sort by:
  • 13 Comments
floaturboatfloaturboatover 14 years ago
four words

fucking awesome, more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Shows promise

This one shows promise.

Writer has to be careful not to try and incorporate elements of different tags.

Hopefully not ws,pedo,scat,nc,rape

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice start

Cannot wait for the sequel. Please add more family members as neighbors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I really loved this story

I can't remember the last time I enjoyed reading a story so much. Please continue to add more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
One of the best in years

This one has it all excellent. Hope you do more

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Too much...

Started out great but got lost in the middle trying to do too much in too little a time frame.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SUPER!!

I just hope this does not end here, got to hear of the daughters friends, and others that are mixed in here. Great 5 dick up out of 5 on this one!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Dude, Where've you been hiding!

Hard to believe this is your first story here. Great story just the right length. At most I would have liked to see some of the scenes drawn out some but still worth a 5 in my book. I can't wait to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great

Is there an empty house on that street. I can see where you are going. Keep writing.

bimsandy2003bimsandy2003almost 13 years ago
Fantatic

Amazing story was sooo hard, that it started aching in the first page. by the way i am a bi guy.

roveroneroveroneover 7 years ago
Hot story...very horny family...

and now understand reason for Pt 00-LOT of characters...

5 and fave story/author...looking forward to next chapters....

BigHornyMeBigHornyMeabout 5 years ago
Brilliant

What a beautiful build up to a very erotic story. I wish I lived in just such a neighbourhood. Please keep going.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
great tease

nice build-up and introduction. can't wait to see where this goes!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous