by R_D_Eddy
This one shows promise.
Writer has to be careful not to try and incorporate elements of different tags.
Hopefully not ws,pedo,scat,nc,rape
Cannot wait for the sequel. Please add more family members as neighbors.
I can't remember the last time I enjoyed reading a story so much. Please continue to add more chapters.
Started out great but got lost in the middle trying to do too much in too little a time frame.
I just hope this does not end here, got to hear of the daughters friends, and others that are mixed in here. Great 5 dick up out of 5 on this one!!
Hard to believe this is your first story here. Great story just the right length. At most I would have liked to see some of the scenes drawn out some but still worth a 5 in my book. I can't wait to read more of your work.
Is there an empty house on that street. I can see where you are going. Keep writing.
Amazing story was sooo hard, that it started aching in the first page. by the way i am a bi guy.
and now understand reason for Pt 00-LOT of characters...
5 and fave story/author...looking forward to next chapters....
What a beautiful build up to a very erotic story. I wish I lived in just such a neighbourhood. Please keep going.
nice build-up and introduction. can't wait to see where this goes!