by R_D_Eddy
nice build-up and introduction. can't wait to see where this goes!
What a beautiful build up to a very erotic story. I wish I lived in just such a neighbourhood. Please keep going.
and now understand reason for Pt 00-LOT of characters...
5 and fave story/author...looking forward to next chapters....
Amazing story was sooo hard, that it started aching in the first page. by the way i am a bi guy.
Is there an empty house on that street. I can see where you are going. Keep writing.
Hard to believe this is your first story here. Great story just the right length. At most I would have liked to see some of the scenes drawn out some but still worth a 5 in my book. I can't wait to read more of your work.
I just hope this does not end here, got to hear of the daughters friends, and others that are mixed in here. Great 5 dick up out of 5 on this one!!
Started out great but got lost in the middle trying to do too much in too little a time frame.
I can't remember the last time I enjoyed reading a story so much. Please continue to add more chapters.
Cannot wait for the sequel. Please add more family members as neighbors.
This one shows promise.
Writer has to be careful not to try and incorporate elements of different tags.
Hopefully not ws,pedo,scat,nc,rape