All Comments on 'Nephlim World Saga: The Prime'

Not sure I can bother to actually read a story when you can't even spell your name correctly. Neph i lim. Not Nephlim. smh.

" a cock that was 8 inches soft and 10 inches hard." Did they have measuring tapes in those days?

"She does, and she then places him in his mouth." She placed him in his own mouth?

"This causes Rephiq to kneel his head back" How does someone kneel his head?

"casually stands before him with a bigger, hardened, cook " The cook was hardened? Odd.

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