All Comments on 'Never That Bold Ch. 02'

I like your idea of fun. The people in this story are all weird of course. That is true to life sometimes. Fine with me. Anyway, thanks.

Grim, sad, pathetic, creepy, icky, and mostly depressing. Why? What was the point? A quick sketch of a decaying world?

After ch. 1 I thought this one would help me figure it out.

It didn't.

All these great little vignettes growing out of ch. 1. Can't wait to see what or who comes next. Thanks

This continued two of the characters from the original story - but brought nothing to the table - sorry. Perhaps if you had concentrated on them in the first chapter, this viewpoint would have made more sense.

The first part was a "Dark tale"...Part 2 was just a lot of words put together in a box, mixed and then what got out was this rumbling...Really? 1*

I don't understand this story and its purpose. The first one was just as sucky as this one which doesn't bring anything new to the table and it got really weird... Derek was a spineless cum sucking wimp--I really wish a "WARNING" was placed to avoid bullshit ass stories such as this one...you're one of my favorite authors--especially when it comes to "LOVING WIVES" but WTF was this⁉️

JimBob44 writes some strange stuff now and then but it is obvious he has quite a following. He has a very disturbing imagination but is always entertaining.

Yes, JimBob either has a vivid imagination, or has met some people we might know, but who keep their secret lives really well hidden from us and the rest of the world. And I might add, that is not a bad thing, not a bad thing at all.

Let's just go with that.

Only character I'd want to meet might be the Judge, and that would just be to talk about the white trash he's met over the years.

If these people vote, God help us.

I really like some of JB's work.

Why is this on an erotic fiction site? Was there any sex?

As I was scrolling I think I saw a part where some kids were talking about their smelly grandma. I pretty much held down the scroll button.

This was worse than the first chapter. Go back to writing about Louisiana coon-asses Jimbob, seems as if that’s something you know about. And at least those stories made sense.

I have to believe, with your track record, this is redeemable........so I'm headed back down the rabbi hole.

I don't know if I even want to go any farther with this.one.

But you got some real issues with the women in your stories, almost as bad as the men. Its so bad its almost too real to bear. Its supposed to be fiction, dude, so stop with the real life caricatures that remind us too well of the anal side of humanity.

Other than that, its kind of fun. Thanks.

Meh.

Are you fucking kidding me? Raped, beaten, in a coma and three bitches for children?

I dont know why you hate women so much; but you need therapy.

The funny thing about this is that readers claim they want realism, and a lot of the underclass lives this way. I agree it's ugly. I do think most readers here have very little appreciation for what reality is and are offended if it intrudes in their cuck/slut or "Hallmark Movie" worlds.

Pretty bad.

Not your best

Man you are having a bad day….