by JimBob44
Well, don't puke on the floor with morning sickness- I just cleaned and mopped it for visitors
This is just good enough to keep reading, but not so good as to care if you keep writing. That's not a slam, just an honest evaluation.
Hope you will keep writing, even if I don't see it in the wrong category.
There is usually a certain reluctant sweetness to JB44's stories. These are just plain unpleasant. Nobody to like at all, or care about. Ick.