by JimBob44
There is usually a certain reluctant sweetness to JB44's stories. These are just plain unpleasant. Nobody to like at all, or care about. Ick.
This is just good enough to keep reading, but not so good as to care if you keep writing. That's not a slam, just an honest evaluation.
Hope you will keep writing, even if I don't see it in the wrong category.
Well, don't puke on the floor with morning sickness- I just cleaned and mopped it for visitors