All Comments on 'New Adventures Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
He loves her too

Good story! Thanks for the hot sex. And thanks for giving him a dusting of reddish blond chest hair, and a treasure trail. All too often, these young studs are bald-chested, what a shame! Scott is all man, and I'm sure he loves Audrey too!

lonelyQuadlonelyQuadover 5 years ago
after the deed

now that their first time was past, their future would be a result of the next few minutes between them... write carefully and your story may grow from good to a favorite. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
so continue it then

What you waiting for?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Premise still good.

Sex happens too fast. Again.

Four stars.

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