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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good story.

Storyline was great. Public sex has always got me hot.

The writing style seemed a little amateurish, but a little practice will easily fix that. After all, this is your first story on the site!

Keep it up. I can't wait to read what you come up with next.

Man RayMan Rayover 18 years ago
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I liked this, way hot!

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