All Comments on 'Nice guy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Wow. That was so ... ugly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Don't get the quiet ones mad

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

There’s an entire section for noncon…

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice start …

… so how much more creativity and energy is there to continue this fantasy tale?

Do not let Yourself be discouraged from negative comments. It is decent enough for a first story here, IMHO. The BDSM label and tags should be clear enough; so nobody should be surprised that this not a romantic PC love story but rather a rough fantasy.

Thank You + best wishes

Simon

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continue please

I LOVE It. Please continue. Please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Your tags are lacking

This is not rough sex, this is rape. This is not rough sex, this is rape. This is not about dominance and submission, it is a rape fantasy. Nothing necessarily wrong with that, except that you conflate consensual nonconsent with not consent. Which is rape. While rape fantasies can make up part of BDSM, it is important that you specify that your story is about rape for those of us who do not want to read about it and would re-experience sexual assault that has left us traumatized.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
agree with the last comment

The mentality here is really fucked that's really all I have to say I wasn't expecting to read about rape its completely different and fucking triggering to this degree because this happens when you reject "nice guys" far too much please put it in the right catergory

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