All Comments on 'Nicole's Sexy Adventures Pt. 03'

Very well written, good dialogue and pacing but I would have liked to see more details of her encounters even at the expense of making the story longer and slower. You'll have to let Nicole grow gradually, if she's always "why am I doing this?" and "why do I like this so much" she'll get boring pretty quick. She should come to understand her behavior and own it over time.

Rachel needs to come by work maybe a little true love interest between her and one of the younger team members?

Linda,

Very hot. Really enjoyed reading and jacking off for you.

Steve

A tasty wrist with including the bosses wife in the sexual mix! Again you nailed the effort to keep your reader riveted with the erotic detailed antics and thoughts of the engaging Nicole! It is a bit of a disappointment there are no young women for Nicole to play with... perhaps one of her coworkers daughters? That could be deliscous turn of events as they split revenge on the company .