All Comments on 'Night at the Drive in'

by dogeme

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BornInvincibleBornInvincibleabout 8 years ago
Where's the beef?

This story lacked build up and plausibility. Keep it up though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pepsi can dick?!

I know half of these stories aren't 100% believable which is fine, but a Pepsi can dick completely ruined it for me! I couldn't not imagine it and it just made the whole thing really odd...there was no build up, she just started going at it, which again is unbelievable! This needs some serious work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Childish Rubbish

Written with the skill of a 14 yr old. Find a new hobby as you clearly are not suited to writing erotic stories !

homerjayhomerjayabout 8 years ago
what could have been

mom, son, and nephew is welcome, but not with this story. try harder.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

was alrite but not the shithole

cock4usecock4useabout 8 years ago
What..?

8 inch diameter? That threw me for a loop, since that's like 3 pepsi cans, bro. I was hoping the story would still work out, but it wasn't plausible. Good try?

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

Would love movie night with aunt.

This story went straight to it though with no build up....

3 stars from me.

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